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Last month a published a really short story entitled Burdened, which was the story of a woman name Emily. Here is the description: Emily is tired of it all. Feeling dejected she decides to commit the ultimate sin. Can the Doc save her from herself or will it be too late? Well happy to say that Burdened has become my #1 most downloaded story since I've been writing. With 120 downloads (which might not be a lot to some) it's something for this young writer to celebrate. If you haven't already read Burdened what are you waiting for? It's only about a 10-15 minute read. Click on the link BURDENED

Make sure to check out my new hot short story BURDENED  FREE on Smashwords.com When I saw short it really is. Short description Emily is tired of it all. Feeling dejected she decides to commit the ultimate sin. Can the Doc save her from herself or will it be too late? Reviews Review by: Rori O'Keeffe on July 26, 2013 : It is a story that hurtles to a crushing finale - as memorable a short piece as I am likely to read. Review by: Steph Anne on July 26, 2013 : From the first sentence you are thrust directly in the middle of a tense, pain filled scene. You think, wait? Did I miss a page? What's going on? I kept reading because the raw emotion of the dialogue grabs you and won't let go. By the end, that comes quickly, you understand. Worth the read.